[No, he's had enough of that particular habit, thank you.]
Mr. Sylar makes no grammatical sense, it makes you sound like a child calling an adult Mr. Dad in a misguided attempt to be respectful, and it's inaccurate to boot. I suppose Mr. Taylor would also be acceptable in a pinch. Though I suspect you might have some issues with that, as it allows Gabriel to continue usurping the identity of one of his victims. Not the first, but a significant one. One connected to Doctor Suresh, I suspect, and thus a way to gain in-roads with him.
[Deductions help. They soothe the itch inside his head, and so he can't stop now that he's started. This is what he does, it's what he's good at. And doing it now is almost like a way to make sure that whoever controlled his mind, the Prophet herself or someone for her, didn't damage the one thing that gives him worth.]
It's already out in the world, John. Both of you may as well be carrying signs that proclaim your emotional issues, they're hardly well hidden or cause for privacy. It's obvious to anyone who looks at either of you.
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[No, he's had enough of that particular habit, thank you.]
Mr. Sylar makes no grammatical sense, it makes you sound like a child calling an adult Mr. Dad in a misguided attempt to be respectful, and it's inaccurate to boot. I suppose Mr. Taylor would also be acceptable in a pinch. Though I suspect you might have some issues with that, as it allows Gabriel to continue usurping the identity of one of his victims. Not the first, but a significant one. One connected to Doctor Suresh, I suspect, and thus a way to gain in-roads with him.
[Deductions help. They soothe the itch inside his head, and so he can't stop now that he's started. This is what he does, it's what he's good at. And doing it now is almost like a way to make sure that whoever controlled his mind, the Prophet herself or someone for her, didn't damage the one thing that gives him worth.]
It's already out in the world, John. Both of you may as well be carrying signs that proclaim your emotional issues, they're hardly well hidden or cause for privacy. It's obvious to anyone who looks at either of you.